Wednesday, March 7, 2012

Poem by Ellie



When I was 4
I like
jelly snakes
chocolate shakes
lemonade
and
strawberry cakes

When I was four
I was so poor
I went to a store
that was next door
they said hello
little fellow
what do you want?

I said
can I please have
jelly snakes
chocolate shakes
lemonade and strawberry cake?
PLEASE

  • This sample shows...My published poem.
  • I have been learning to...try and make a poem that has words that rhyme example. snakes, shakes, cakes
  • One thing I think that I did well was...working with Gracie to write my poem.
  • One thing I think I can improve on is...I'd like to make some longer poems.


1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Cool Ellie, I liked the water slide too. From Gracie