When I was 4
I like
jelly snakes
chocolate shakes
lemonade
and
strawberry cakes
When I was four
I was so poor
I went to a store
that was next door
they said hello
little fellow
what do you want?
I said
can I please have
jelly snakes
chocolate shakes
lemonade and strawberry cake?
PLEASE
- This sample shows...My published poem.
- I have been learning to...try and make a poem that has words that rhyme example. snakes, shakes, cakes
- One thing I think that I did well was...working with Gracie to write my poem.
- One thing I think I can improve on is...I'd like to make some longer poems.
1 comment:
Cool Ellie, I liked the water slide too. From Gracie
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