• This sample shows...the ANZACs fighting in the war.
• I have been learning to...use a picture to help me with my ideas for my writing and as I wrote I was thinking about actually being in the war myself.
• One thing I think that I did well was...I did a good picture. I like the way I did the parachutes and in the writing I tried to spell hard words that I needed for the story.
• One thing I think I can improve on is...using the COPS to do more editing and fixing up by myself.
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