Cats Poem by Jessica

Cats

I like cats

Any cats

Especially black, white and grey cats

My favourite is Russian Blue

And tortoise shell too

I like grown up cats

Better than kittens

That wreck your house

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B   I    T   S!

by Jessica

• This sample shows...my own published writing.
• I have been learning to...put the words into more lines so that it looks better and reads like a poem.
• One thing I think that I did well was...writing the poem all by myself.
• Next I'd like to...do a different kind of poem.

Poem by Gracie

I Like Cake

I like cake

Just any cake

Chocolate banana and carrot cake

With lemon icing

Dribbling down the side

The cake gives me a tingling feeling

When I put it in my mouth

It makes me go all crazy

When the taste hits my mouth

So if you have a cake

On your birthday

Chocolate banana or anyother flavour

on your birthday

make sure

you

invite

me!

• This sample shows...My published poem that I typed up with Ellie.
• I have been learning to...organise my ideas in to a good order so my poem makes sense.
• One thing I think that I did well was...that I focused and worked hard to get my poem finished.
• One thing I think I can improve on is...try and make a poem that rhymes.

Poem by Ellie

When I was 4

I like

jelly snakes

chocolate shakes

lemonade

and

strawberry cakes

When I was four

I was so poor

I went to a store

that was next door

they said hello

little fellow

what do you want?

I said

can I please have

jelly snakes

chocolate shakes

lemonade and strawberry cake?

PLEASE

• This sample shows...My published poem.
• I have been learning to...try and make a poem that has words that rhyme example. snakes, shakes, cakes
• One thing I think that I did well was...working with Gracie to write my poem.
• One thing I think I can improve on is...I'd like to make some longer poems.