Writing Editing by

• This sample shows...my writing editing.
• I have been learning to...use the COPS to edit and re-order my ideas.
• One thing I think that I did well was...I just did a good job I think.
• One thing I think I can improve on is...adding full stops as I am writing.

Writing Editing by Luke

who

• This sample shows...
• I have been learning to...
• One thing I think that I did well was...
• One thing I think I can improve on is...