Draft Writing by Fraser

• This sample shows...me working hard on my writing.

• I have been learning to...do comics by drawing detailed pictures and put words to the pictures.

• One thing I think that I did well was...I worked with focus and stayed on task so I got lots done.

• One thing I think I can improve on is...Now that I have reread my story I think I need to add more detail to the words part to better explain my ideas.